March 23, 2012

Syd and Smitty's Step Eight

Syd shared  beautiful imagery for Step Eight with me. I just tweaked to fit the Haiku form.


The ones I've harmed, their
Names written in soft beach sand
Ocean's tides erase.
Posted by at
Labels: , ,

2 comments:

  1. Simply MeMarch 23, 2012 at 1:51 PM

    I like it! :)

    ReplyDelete
  2. SydMarch 29, 2012 at 4:28 AM

    Thanks for your editing. I don't quite get the haiku form but will try again!

    ReplyDelete

I welcome your thoughts. Keep me honest~

Subscribe to: Post Comments (Atom)